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[Half creative] Sang Lan

发布者: lazybones | 发布时间: 2005-10-13 15:15| 查看数: 8199| 评论数: 3|

<FONT face="Times New Roman">Sang Lan is a handicapped gal, injured her spine while performing in a sport competition in <st1:place w:st="on"><st1:country-region w:st="on">America</st1:country-region></st1:place>. And perhaps she would never stand up all over the rest of her life. When she was born, however, she was normal and healthy and simultaneously endowed with special genius at physical exercise. As a potential athletic star, she was selected into national gymnastic team at the age of 10. With prominent coaching and professinal training, ahead of her was a brilliant future full of flowers and applause. But the hope was wrecked by an accident disabled her from any performance when she dropped from the uneven bars.</FONT>
<FONT face="Times New Roman">She never cried, neither on the road to hospital nor on the operating table. On the contrary, sweet smiles were always hanged on her 14-year-old face. The sensible girl is reluctant to have her sorrow and pain detected by people caring about her. Spiritual strength helped her conquer the painful operations on her one after another. Without good cooperation with the doctors, she would not recover so well.</FONT>
<FONT face="Times New Roman">It is more than three years since that nightmare. When the gal, coupled with her stories, are fading out people’s memory, she appeared again in the vedio studio, working for the preparation of the 2008 Olympic Games. </FONT>
<FONT face="Times New Roman">Everyone says she is a girl of strong character. Disabled, she began to learn English and computer skills. Unable to making sports events, she tried to contribute to her mother country in another way. She is on the wheel chair, but her spirit always flies. She has set an example of fortitude, optimism and forward-looking for everyone of us while materializing the Olympic spirits of  “Swifter, Higher and Stronger ”in a special sense.</FONT><br><br><br>


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Cactus 发表于 2005-10-14 20:48:46

Dear Lazybone,
   I like this article of you very much, and I wish I could have made it into the area for "good articles", though I was told that it's still beyond my capacity now.(Maybe I will consult David later why I could not dealing with aritcles here as the other administrators do). Nevertheless, there's still one thing I would like to point out for you. Normally, we don't begin a sentence with "And" and "But", for these two words are usually used to link two clauses together to make an entire compound sentence.
Yours sincerely,
Cactus
lazybones 发表于 2005-10-15 12:53:27
<FONT face="Times New Roman">Sang Lan is a handicapped gal, injured her spine while performing in a sport competition in <st1:place w:st="on"><st1:country-region w:st="on">America</st1:country-region></st1:place>. <FONT color=#f709f7></FONT><FONT color=#f70968>Moveover, she would be likely never to</FONT> stand up all over the rest of her life. When she was born, however, she was normal and healthy and simultaneously endowed with special genius at physical exercise. As a potential athletic star, she was selected into national gymnastic team at the age of 10. With prominent coaching and professinal training, ahead of her was a brilliant future full of flowers and applause<FONT color=#ff0066>, but</FONT> the hope was wrecked by an accident disabled her from any performance when she dropped from the uneven bars.</FONT>
<FONT face="Times New Roman">She never cried, neither on the road to hospital nor on the operating table. On the contrary, sweet smiles were always hanged on her 14-year-old face. The sensible girl is reluctant to have her sorrow and pain detected by people caring about her. Spiritual strength helped her conquer the painful operations on her one after another. Without good cooperation with the doctors, she would not recover so well.</FONT>
<FONT face="Times New Roman">It is more than three years since that nightmare. When the gal, coupled with her stories, are fading out people’s memory, she appeared again in the vedio studio, working for the preparation of the 2008 Olympic Games. </FONT>
<FONT face="Times New Roman">Everyone says she is a girl of strong character. Disabled, she began to learn English and computer skills. Unable to making sports events, she tried to contribute to her mother country in another way. She is on the wheel chair, but her spirit always flies. She has set an example of fortitude, optimism and forward-looking for everyone of us while materializing the Olympic spirits of  “Swifter, Higher and Stronger ”in a special sense.</FONT>
<FONT color=#3300ff><FONT color=#ff9900><FONT color=#3809f7>That really helps, otherwise I would risk making the same mistake anywhere. According to cactus' guide, I made a little modification. </FONT></FONT></FONT>
<FONT color=#3300ff><FONT color=#ff9900><FONT color=#3809f7>I modified it on impulse owing to my appreciation to the original composition. </FONT></FONT></FONT><FONT color=#3300ff><FONT color=#ff9900><FONT color=#3809f7>I am really in two minds on how to appraise the article becuse it is not all my own words. If it is valued too much, I am afraid my modification does not worth that. If to devalue it, it is not only impolite but also unfair to the author thought I do not know who he is and where the article is from originally. As it is a dilemma, we had better enjoy it with appreciation rather than do anything else. I suppose it would be the best respect to the original author.</FONT></FONT></FONT>
<FONT color=#3300ff><FONT color=#ff9900>Another point, may I say "<FONT face="Times New Roman">she would be likely never to stand up the rest of her life</FONT>" ?</FONT> </FONT><br><br><br><br><br><br>

slowpoke 发表于 2005-10-16 16:45:00
I would say, she could probably never (may never be able to) stand up for the rest of her life.
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