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新二18课 人称改写练习--请高手修改指正

发布者: annyli | 发布时间: 2008-12-14 00:43| 查看数: 1977| 评论数: 1|

18课人称换写---以酒店老板的身份改写

One day,I saw a young lady was setting near the door in my pub.

After she had had lunch, she was looking for something there.

I went to and asked her:"Did you have a good meal?"

"Yes,thank you. but I can't pay the bill.I haven't got my bag."she answered.

"Where did you put your bag on?"I asked.

"I had left it on a chair beside the door and now it wasn't there"

she answered anxiously.

I was immediately understand that must be my dog does it again.

I went to the garden and found it on the grass.

I returned with the bag and gave it to her.

I said sorry to her and explained:"my dog had taken it into the garden,He often does this!"

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david 发表于 2008-12-14 21:31:41
One day,I saw a young lady was(不要) setting near the door in my pub.

After she had had lunch, she was looking(用进行时不合适,用looked) for something there.

I went to(多余) and asked her:"Did you have a good meal?"

"Yes,thank you. but I can't pay the bill.I haven't got my bag."she answered.

"Where did you put your bag on(用put on不合适,换成leave your bag或者place your bag)?"I asked.

"I had(have) left it on a chair beside the door and now it wasn't(isn't) there"

she answered anxiously.

I was(多余) immediately understand(最好用knew或者learnt) that must be my dog does it again(itmust be done by my dog again).

I went to the garden and found it on the grass.

I returned with the bag and gave it back to her.

I said sorry to her and explained:"my dog had taken(took) it into the garden,He often does this!"
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