这是fire同学根据新二第28课改写的作文，请大家帮他纠错。

Mike is one of those rare students who result is best in my daughter's school. When he returns home at night. he always finds that a lot of student's parents even reporters visited his home. Because of this, they have disturbed mike's study. So his parents has put up 'No loud talking' signs on his door. But these have not had any effect. Then he has put up 'Be politely refuse with meeting' signs on his gate, but these have no effect yet. He asked me how he would do and I told him that he can pretend was not home. Now he put up a sign outside his gate that 'this family has been moving.'

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1. whoresult--- who has best result.

我觉得用whose results are the bestin his school可能更好一些。

2. a lot of student's parents--- a lot of parents

3. vistited his home--- in his house

4. No loud talking---Be quiet, please

5. 'Be politely refuse with meeting'---'No entrance'

6. He asked me how he would do ---what he should do with it

7. I told him that he can pretend was not home---I told him that he could pretend not to be at home.

8. that 'this family has been moving'---saying'this family has moved away'

Just to Grammar:

1. who result is best —— who have best results.

2.a lot of student's parents —— students'

3. visited——visit

4. So his parents has put up 'No loud talking' signs on his door. ——have

5. I told him that he can pretend was not home—— could, to be not