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[原创] To Globalize Environmental Protection

发布者: lazybones | 发布时间: 2005-10-25 17:16| 查看数: 5398| 评论数: 3|

In the 21 century, one of the most serious problems puzzling human race is how to protect environment effectively. Though it is a worldwide awareness and many countries and contributors are being dedicated to it, there is still too much to be desired. According to the imperfect result, a new argument was put forward that the force of environmental protection all over the world should be organized and cooperate as a whole. I believe it is the sole way to tackle the globalized problem. 
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Most developing countries have no the ability to fulfill their demand of keeping up with the pace of worldwide economic development and meanwhile preserve the nature based on their limited money. Another point that no one would argue is that the developing countries do not have advanced technologies in environment protection, of which the utilizing rate of energy is an example. So in order to build a beautiful international family, it is the developed countries’ duty to help undeveloped countries, funding them in environmental projects and providing them technical support. On the other hand, undeveloped countries should also widen their horizon and regard sustainable development as their ultimate target. The United Nation, as a widely accepted international organization, should exert its positive effect on coordination. 
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From what have been mentioned above, we can draw such a conclusion safely that the environment protection is a problem throughout the world and only to solve it in a worldwide scope could we achieve an ideal accomplishment.

argument, awareness, Globalize, Protection, tackle

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Cactus 发表于 2005-10-25 20:42:56

Dear Lazybone,
Many suggested version is as following:
In the 21[th] century, one of the most serious problems puzzling human race is how to protect environment effectively. Though it is a worldwide awareness and many countries and contributors are being dedicated to it, there is still too much to be desired. According to the imperfect result, a new argument was put forward that the force of environmental protection all over the world should be (organized and cooperate as a whole) [organized as a whole with international cooperation]. I believe it is the sole way to tackle the globalized problem. 
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Most developing countries (have no)[don't have] the ability to fulfill their demand of keeping up with the pace of worldwide economic development and meanwhile preserve the nature (based on)[due to] their limited money. Another point that no one would argue is that the developing countries do not have advanced technologies in environment protection, of which the utilizing rate of energy is an example. So in order to build a beautiful international family, it is the developed countries’ duty to help (undeveloped)[underdeveloped] countries, funding them in environmental projects and providing them [with] technical support. On the other hand, (undeveloped) [underdeveloped] countries should also widen their horizon and regard sustainable development as their ultimate target. The United Nation, as a widely accepted international organization, should exert its positive effect on coordination. 
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From what (have)[has] been mentioned above, we can draw such a conclusion (safely)[too chinglish to get this word] that the (environment)[environmental] protection is a problem throughout the world and only to solve it in a worldwide scope could we achieve an ideal accomplishment.
 Yours sincerely,
Cactus

lazybones 发表于 2005-10-27 10:41:52

In the 21th century, one of the most serious problems puzzling human race is how to protect environment effectively. Though it is a worldwide awareness and many countries and contributors are being dedicated to it, there is still too much to be desired. According to the imperfect result, a new argument was put forward that the force of environmental protection all over the world should be organized as a whole with international cooperation. I believe it is the sole way to tackle the globalized problem. 
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As a phenomenon, environmental problems in some countries sometimes are not directly caused by themselves —— particularly the deforestation and over farming in one country can lead to sandstorm in countries nearby and specially the emission of exhaust all over the world results in global warming, so called greenhouse effect.
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In the battle to environmental deterioration, most developing countries have no the ability to fulfill their demand of keeping up with the pace of worldwide economic development and meanwhile preserve the nature based on their limited money. Another point that no one would argue is that the developing countries do not have advanced technology in environmental protection, of which the utilizing rate of energy is an example. Therefore in order to build a beautiful international family, it is the developed countries’ duty to help underdeveloped countries, funding them in environmental projects and providing them with technical support. On the other hand, underdeveloped countries should also widen their horizon and target sustainable development. The United Nation, as a widely accepted international organization, should exert its positive effect on coordination. 
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From what has been mentioned above, we can draw such a conclusion that the environmental protection is a problem throughout the world and only to solve it in a worldwide scope could we achieve an ideal accomplishment.

Modified on 27th Oct.
Thanks to Cactus.

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lazybones 发表于 2005-11-4 07:56:04

In the 21th (st) century, one of the most serious problems puzzling human race is how to protect environment effectively. Though it is a worldwide awareness and many countries and contributors are being dedicated to it, there is still too much to be desired. According to the imperfect result, a new argument was put forward that the force of environmental protection all over the world should be organized as a whole with international cooperation. I believe it is the sole way to tackle the globalized problem (dificulty, for variety). 
As a phenomenon, environmental problems in some countries sometimes are not directly caused by themselves —— particularly the deforestation and over farming in one country can lead to sandstorm in countries nearby and specially the emission of exhaust all over the world results in global warming, so called greenhouse effect.
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In the battle to (combat) environmental deterioration, most developing countries have no the (leave out) ability to fulfill their demand of keeping up with the pace of worldwide economic development and meanwhile preserve the nature based on their limited money. Another point that no one would argue is that the developing countries do not have advanced technology in environmental protection, of which the utilizing rate of energy is an example. Therefore in order to build a beautiful international family, it is the developed countries’ duty to help underdeveloped countries ( nations, for variety). , funding them in environmental projects and providing them with technical support. On the other hand, underdeveloped countries should also widen their horizon and target sustainable development. The United Nation, as a widely accepted international organization, should exert its positive effect on coordination. 
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From what has been mentioned above, we can draw such a conclusion that the environmental protection is a problem throughout the world and only to solve it in a worldwide scope could we achieve an ideal accomplishment.
Mark: 7.5
Recite more stationary sentences usually.

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