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Getting to Know th World outside the Campus

It (1) is of great significance for a college student to know the world outside the campus. In this (2)fast-developing “Information Age”, college students must(3) keep pace with the progress of the world.(4①) Additionally, by contacting the off-campus world, college students can have chance to more practical skills.(4 ②)Therefore,(5) how to know the world outside the campus (6)is worth our attention.

Many ways can be adopted by our college students to increase our knowledge of the world.(4③) Firstly, mass media, such as radios, televisions, newspapers and the Internet, are a good choice,(7)by which we can (8)be well informed about what is happening. (4④)Secondly, providing volunteer services is an efficiently way to contact and know the society.(4⑤)Thirdly, we can take part-time jobs to increase our practical experience.

(4⑥)As for me, I wll try jto create and grasp more chances to contact the society. In my opinion, getting to know the off-campus world is (9①)as important(9②) as improving academic performance.(4⑦) Therefore, I suggest every college student should(10①) not(11) confine himself to the campus(10②) but often go outside.

点评

（1）“be of+n.”相当于”be+adj.”。

（2）符合形容词做定语，意为“迅速发展的”

（3）意为“跟上”

（4）衔接词语使文章条理清晰、意思连贯。

（5）“疑问词+不定式”结构充当主语。

（6）be worth sth./doing sth.意为“值得......”。

7．Which在定语从句中充当介词宾语。

（8）inform是及物动词，一味“通知，告知”，经常用作被动结构“be informed about/of”.

(9) 同级比较结构。

（10）连接并列结构，意为“不是......而是“。

（11）意为“将自己局限于”。