A: Well, there were too many long thin wires attacking magnetized metal spheres around the exhibition. Many sculptures brought electric current. So, these things seem to shock the visitors emotionally, even to give them electric shocks.
Summary Writing:
When the writer entered into the gallery, he saw a notice saying not to touch the exhibits. These objects brought electricity. Around the exhibition, is being full of long thin wires lined up against the wall and attacking many metal spheres. These spheres had been magnetized, repelling and attracting each other all the time. In the centre of the hall, there were some tall structures, containing colored lights, which continuously flicked. Sparks were emitted from black boxes and red lamps went on and off angrily.
Composition:
依然没做。实在写不出imaginary gallery，恳请大家提供例子，仅作参考。
个人评价：回答问题的部分，一开始口语练习阶段，十分夹生，自己读了7遍课文，跟录音读了5遍开始勉强上手回答，主要原因是：这个场景十分陌生，对于艺术品，和霓虹灯这种现代艺术的描述用词会的太少。一开始练习回答的时候，背了很多原文。作文要求，让你自己写一个艺术品展览，我不曾去过展览馆，同时，就是芬兰美人鱼放在我面前，我也描述不好。只有请求别人的范文给个参考。 |
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