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[四级写作] 2011年12月四级写作基础备考讲义-第44讲

发布者: 上官飞飞 | 发布时间: 2011-9-26 14:27| 查看数: 1049| 评论数: 0|

5. Should Class Attendance be Required?

框架搭建:通过审题可知这是一篇对比分析类作文,其基本段落安排如下:第一段概述大学里采取的点名制度,说明这种制度的作用;第二段指出对待该制度的不同态度并说明理由;第三段表明“我”对点名制度的看法和“我”的理由。

Should Class Attendance be Required?

Nowadays required class attendance is very common at colleges and universities. Most people accept ti as a necessary policy t ensure the normal teaching order and create a good study atmosphere. Besieds, they think it is a good urge for those students who lack self-discipline.

However, still some others do not agree this argument. In their opinion, rigid attendance policies do not benefit students’ studies. A student may have to give up a lecture which he finds bital to his studies simply because he dare not run the risk of being penalized for his absence of his course. Besides, they say there is no proven correlation between attendance and performance.

As for me, I am in favor of the latter opinion. Required class attendance may secure one hundred percent attendance for a course, but it does not make much sense. A student may never be absent in a course, but who knows whether or not he is just sistting there daydreaming all the time. Therefore, a student should allowed to decide for himself whether an in-class wxperience is worthwhile.

6. Craze in Famous Brands on Campus.

框架搭建:通过审题可知这是一篇说明现象类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段概述大学生热衷名牌的现象;第二段说明导致大学生热衷名牌的原因;第三段谈谈“我”对大学生追求名牌的看法并给出相关建议。

Craze in Famous Brands on Campus

In recent years there has been a craze in famous brands among college students. On campus we can see many students dressing in famous brands from head to toe. It is worth more attention that even some students from poor families also begin to join in the army following famous brands.

College students’ preference for famous brands is caused mainly by the following factors. Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of identity and position. They believe it can show their good taste. What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which has a great attraction to young college students. Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their unhealthy comsumption habit.

As far as I am concerned, it is irrational for our college students to be carzy about buying famous brands. After all, we have no income source. It is shameful to use our parents’ money to satisfy our vanity. Therefore, I suggest that we should follow the consumption principle of being practical and thrifty.

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