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大家来找错之大学专业八级的改错练习81

发布者: 从心出发 | 发布时间: 2012-5-6 00:46| 查看数: 867| 评论数: 0|

Many of the home electric goods which are advertised as liberating the modern women tend to have the opposite effect, so they simply __1__ change the nature of work instead of eliminting it. Machines have a certain novelty value, as toys for adults. It is certainly less __2__ tired to put clothes in a washing machine, but the time saved does __3__ not really amount too much: the machine has to be watched, the __4__ clothes have to be carefully sorted out, stains removed by hand,water changed, clothes taken out, aired and ironed. It would be more liberal to pack it all off to a laundary and not necessarily __5__ more expensive, since no capital investment is required. Nevertheless, if you really want to save time you do not make __6__ cakes with an electric mixer, you buy one in a shop. If one compares the image of the woman in the women's magazine to the goods advertised __7__ by those periodicals, one realizes how useful a projected image can be commercially.

  A careful balance has to be struck: if you show a labor-saving device, follow it up with a complex recipe on the next page; on __8__ any account hint at the notion that a woman could get herself a __9__ job, but instead foster her sense of her own usefulness, emphasize __10__ the creative aspect of her funtion as a housewife.

  答案:

  1.sobecause.第一句话里两个分句之间的关系应该是主句为结果,从句为原因,所以so改为because。aslike.当as做介词使用时往往表示“作为,当作”,而这里的意思是“像……”,所以应改为like,因为当like作介词用时,表示“像……”。tiredtiring.tired形容人,表示“累了”,如果说某物使人累,应用tiring。tooto.这里amount应和介词to组成词组表示“达到(多少)”,考试吧如:That plan will never amount to anything.liberalliberating.liberal的含义是“自由的,解放的,大方的”,含义不贴切,应换成liberating,意思是“将(某人)解放了的”。

  6.NeverthelessSimilary/Likewise.这里上下句的关系式并列的,平行的,不能用nevertheless引导,应换成Similarly或者Likewise。

  7.towith.compare...to...的意思是“将……比作……”,有比喻的含义,人这里是“把……和……相比较”。

  8.complexcomplicated.complex的意思是“(由于有许多关联部分组成,所以某结构)很复杂”。

  9.anyno.由于后面有but,所以这里应把any换成no,表示“无论如何不能……”。

  10.^emphasizeand; emphasizeemphasizing.emphasize分句和foster分句如果是并列的话,应该加上一个连词,不能仅用逗号连接,或者把emphasize变成-ing形式构成分句修饰foster分句。

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