【四六级作文训练营】改词扩句 1
节目规则
内容:四六级作文简易提高法
作业:改词扩句练习
要求:不改变原文句意,通过词汇和语法手段提升句子质量;
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Others think that the utilization of waste products will be eliminated sooner or later with the emergence of hi-te . However, I did not consider that factor carefully. Because I hold the view that waste materials can be made good use of to help reduce the living cost.
I did not consider that factor carefully.(原句)
I fail to take that factor into careful consideration.(改句)
讲解:在这个简单句中,主要做了两个改变,一是把"did not"改成"fail to", 同样的意思,可是词汇应用的灵活度却大大提高。二是把"consider…carefully"改成了"take sth into careful consideration", 在考场作文中,词组的运用是个亮点,而且英语中静态居多(名词用的多),汉语中动态居多(动词用的多),在此把动词"consider"变成名词"consideration",顿时使英文更加地道。
今日作业:With the development of society, people pay more and more attention to the quality of life.
They live a happier life. They take part in all kinds of social activities and have more holidays.
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