2014考研英语作文热门话题范文：老外过春节

　　(文章直接描述图画内容，不妥，可加一句图画类作文的开头常用句，如As is vividly depicted in the picture,等)The black man, with a happy and delighted face(改为with a happiness of facial expression), is spendingspring festival with a Chinese family. Conspicuously,it is a (改为an)encouraging scene relate to cultureintegration between China and west(可改为the westcountries), which is a(改为an) excellent offspring ofnew century.Several factor(改为factors，several意为“几个”，其后名词应用复数形式) weight heavily for thisemerging trend illustrate(改为illustrated) in the picture, yet, two kernels suspended on thetop of the list which should never be overlooked. To begin with, the Chinese economy haswitnessed its unprecedented lever(改为level,unprecedented level表示“前所未有的水平") ofgrowth in past 30 years, which give an powerful impetus to the publicity of Chinese civilization.What’s more, Chinese culture, though through perpetual wars and turbulence, preserve itsvitality and glamour(改为its vitality and glamour are preserved), (加and its)assetsappreciated by most foreigners. There are encouraging parallels today, as many westerners inone wave after another making their trip(改为trips) to China to get panorama of Chineseheritage.From my perspective, various measures should be made to foster this integration.Firstly, suitable atmosphere must be created, where our culture and its counterparts canco-exist in harmonious.,(注意标点的正确使用)by us. Secondly, the authorities ought to lunchvarious publicity campaigns to make Chinese culture known to(加the) world. The cultural thrivehas loomed, and the economic prosperity will not be far away.

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　　参考分数：13分(满分20分)