Topic(题目)：

In some countries, teenager have jobs whilethey are still students. Do you think this is agood idea? Support your opinion by usingspecific reasons and details.

Model Essay(范文)：

I don't think it is a good ideas for teenagers tohave jobs while they are still students. It caninterfere with their studies, It can disrupt their home life, and it takes away part of theirchildhood that their can never replace.

Education today is very complex and difficult .In order to learn and get good grades, astudent must work very hard and concentrate, This means attending classes from early in themorning until late afternoon, then doing research for projects, then going home and doinghomework. It's a busy schedule for everyone. For someone trying to hold down a job, it's evenharder. Students need all their energy for their studies. If they're working after class at night,they're going to be tired the next day. They won't be able to concentrate. This will have anegative impact on their learning, and eventually on their grades.

Having a job can also disrupt a teenager's home life. Families spend less and less timetogether. If a teenager has a job to go to after school, he won't be home for dinner.He won'tbe home after dinner either, and may not get home until late at night, This means he doesn'thave a lot of time to spend with his family .If he doesn't have a car, it can mean changes in hisparents' schedule ,too. They have to drive him to work and pick him up.

The main drawback of a teenager having a job while he's still a student is that he's missingout on the fun of being young. He has a whole lifetime in which he'll have to earn a living. This isthe last free time he'll have, It's the last chance he'll have to hang out with friends and justenjoy himself. Soon enough he'll have to worry about paying the rent and buying food.

Jobs bring money, but money isn't everything. A teenager with a job gives us too much. Noone should spend all his time at working, and especially not a teenager.