题目

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people today know more about the world events than their parents did before. Include details and examples in your explanation.

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@北京-在职-11、19Personally speaking, I think young people today know more about the world events than their parents did before, because a lot of advanced technologies or media bring us more convenience today. Well you know, in the past, if our parents wanted to get information, they would read newspaper or chat to（chat后接宾语，一般加to或with） their neighbors. However, today we can use a lot of procedures（？sorry，没听清楚） among media to get information in no time, such as mobile phone, TV and computer. So in this way, we can get information about world events more efficiently and accurately.

综合讲评：

Delivery：语音语调都比较不错，但是需要注意个别长句的断句，注意说话时的气息交换，可以让语言表达更加自然。

Language use：虽然整体上单词与语法没有大错误，也不会因此而影响整体印象，但是细节不容忽视。语言比较朴实，但是能够有效表达自己的想法，不过可以考虑积累些实用表达，丰富自己的语言。

Topic development：内容展开丰富，逻辑也很清晰，你的口语应该没有大问题，加油！

@北京高三11.12Personally speaking, I definitely believe nowadays young people know more world events than their parents did before, because nowadays there are various ways for us to get information, such as the Internet, the social media and the TV programs. However, in the past, our parents can only get news from the traditional newspapers. I’d like to read news from the social media, such as the Wechat public account, and the Facebook. I can select the particular topic I am interested into and to（删） get some information from them. However, my parents can only know some of their interests by reading the newspaper. It is waste of the time.

综合讲评：

Delivery：语音问题不大，但语调过于平淡，丰富的语调变化可以调动听众的注意。

Language use：语法整体上很不错，明显错误不多。但是注意定冠词the的使用，文中很多情况其实并不需要使用定冠词的。

Topic development：内容上对两种立场的反复比较容易让人忘掉重点，尤其是最后不是强调自己的观点，又去说父母时代的不便。并且说到waste of the time时，这样的表达语气有些重。

参考范文

As far as I am concerned, young people now have a much broader world view than their parents did. First, considering the advent of communication technology, we can now learn the world events at one click of a button on our computers or cellphones. The information provided on line is up-to-date, easy to access and widely available to the public. This kind of technology was simply unavailable thirty years ago. Secondly, education nowadays is more focused on international events, rather than domestic issues. As globalization spreads around the world, youngsters have broader visions on matters beyond their national boundaries than their parents would have before. That’s why I think the younger generations have a much broader understanding of events than their parents did.