Now i will use my chinglish to speak with you(i want someone to correct the wrong scentences) : We who want to learn the english, are the army . We wade over a river , climb up a hill , then we find the we have to climb up another one ... and so on. What are we fighting for? We sometimes we think bout it and want to give up the misson. But finally , our commander have persuade us:" you have to advance(you shound work hard),or your animy will make you to do that (your teacher and the society won't gorgive you ), you are not coward (i am a human too, ), you have power(i have a strong body), you have honours(i havn't give up now), you have ability to show it out , to protect your country ,to make it more powerful to defend all attacks (we have the abilities to learn the technology from the foreign country ). " Then we come around and be filled with confidence and go on the way again,and finally we found learning english is such a happy thing. <br>[em10]
[此贴子已经被作者于2005-11-12 20:52:28编辑过]
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