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发布者: spade | 发布时间: 2005-11-9 19:54| 查看数: 2871| 评论数: 8|

You caught drew such a beautiful picture already! Why only make it on the picture…
Your picture tells everyone that the colours of the world need everyone to drew.. In fact we can do better..
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david 发表于 2005-11-9 20:05:58
题目出得不清楚,问了一下,是要翻译,我翻译一下 You caught drew such a beautiful picture already! Why only make it on the picture…
Your picture tells everyone that the colours of the world need everyone to drew..

In fact we can do better.. 你已经画了一幅如此漂亮的画,为什么仅仅在画中表达它呢?。。。 你的画告诉每一个人世界的色彩需要每个人去描绘。。 事实上我们能做的更好。。。 注:有些内容缺乏上下文,所以也不知道到底想说什么。

spade 发表于 2005-11-9 20:08:03
是一个小兄弟写的环保宣传语,请高人帮忙检查
soso 发表于 2005-11-9 20:12:26
“独乐乐不如众乐乐”? 雾太大了,还有没有更多的信息啊?或者问问美洲的兄弟。
笑天猴 发表于 2005-11-9 20:36:05
原文是

你的手已可以描绘如此美丽的风景

为什么只让它留在画中呢

你的画告诉每一个人

世界的色彩

需要我们每一个人来描绘

其实我们可以画得更好 自己翻译结果:

You caught drew such a beautiful picture already! Why only make it on the picture

Your picture tells everyone that the colours of the world need everyone to drew..

In fact we can do better.. 希望那位高手能帮忙检查一下

笑天猴 发表于 2005-11-9 20:38:53
我觉得有些问题!但又不知道在什么地方 所以spade叫我在这里求助! 我的QQ是179037754
笑天猴 发表于 2005-11-9 21:45:50
Your hand has been possible to describe the so beautiful scenery
Why only lets it keep in the picture...
Your picture tells each person
World color
Needs our each person to describe...
Actually we may draw well... 我又得到一份, 可以吗?
david 发表于 2005-11-9 22:23:12
以下是引用笑天猴在2005-11-9 21:45:50的发言:
Your hand has been possible to describe the so beautiful scenery
Why only lets it keep in the picture...
Your picture tells each person
World color
Needs our each person to describe...
Actually we may draw well... 我又得到一份,
这个翻译可以。前面一份太晦涩了
kevin 发表于 2005-11-10 09:47:10

You caught drew such a beautiful picture already! Why only make it on the picture

Your picture tells everyone that the colours of the world need everyone to drew.. In fact we can do better..>>> 句中2 个 picture 重复,最好换一下,make it on 欠妥, 最好换一种表达方式,colours 用单数较好,to drew 与 colour 搭配似乎欠妥,better 前可加 much 以上仅是个人意见, ^_^

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