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<p>It was a hot afternoon. A vending machine was at a void deck.&nbsp;Grandpa felt thirsty after doing his exercise.Grandpa saw a vending machine nearby. He wanted to buy a can of soft drink.He quickly took out his money but he did not know the vending machine was spoiled.He put his money into the coin slot. He pressed the buttons but drink could not come out.His face turned red with anger.He jumped and kicked the vending machine and made a big fuss. A lady and his husband stared at the man angrily.They were shocked. At last, Grandpa knew the vending machine was spoiled.</p><p></p><p>2 November,2005</p>

<div class="quote"><b>以下是引用<i>cxfeng</i>在2006-7-7 0:25:47的发言：</b><br/><p>It was a hot afternoon. A vending machine was at a void deck.&nbsp;Grandpa felt thirsty after doing his exercise.Grandpa saw a vending machine nearby. He wanted to buy a can of soft drink.He quickly took out his money but he did not know the vending machine was spoiled.He put his money into the coin slot. He pressed the buttons but drink could not come out.His face turned red with anger.He jumped and kicked the vending machine and made a big fuss. A lady and his husband stared at the man angrily.They were shocked. At last, Grandpa knew the vending machine was spoiled.</p><p></p><p>2 November,2005</p></div><p>Editted Version :</p><p>It was a hot afternoon.&nbsp;&nbsp;Grandpa felt thirsty after<strong> doing exercise</strong>.Grandpa saw a vending machine nearby. He wanted to buy a can of soft drink.He quickly took out his money and <strong>put coins</strong> into the coin slot.&nbsp;<strong> But he never knew</strong> <strong>that the vendig machine was spoiled</strong> .He pressed the buttons but drink could not come out.<strong>He thought&nbsp; the</strong> <strong>coin slot was jammed</strong>&nbsp; and his face turned red with anger.He jumped and kicked the vending machine heavily and made a big fuss. A lady and his husband stared at&nbsp;him&nbsp;&nbsp;angrily.They were shocked. At last, Grandpa knew the vending machine was spoiled.<strong> What an unlucky day it is</strong> !</p>

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