[原创]library

发布者: zoe | 发布时间: 2006-7-17 12:17| 查看数: 13810| 评论数: 11|

16th July Sunday                                CoolToday is Sunday, what is cool and suitable day after rained yesterday night. My classmate and me went to the library which standing in citizen center, Futain. It is a new building and had opening the day before yesterday. It cover is gray and has five floor. There are much various books in the library. I was so happy and excited, when I have turned over the books. I can’t help myself to want to borrow this book to read. Therefore I joined the line to make a borrower’s card own. There were so much people who were arranged four long teams there. An hour by, I came to the information desk. I handed in my information form and a piece of photo, and then handed over one hundred yuan as the deposit to them. This time I finally got my borrower’s card.Then I came to the shelf setting the English books and picked four books out, put those books and my borrower’s cared in a desk whose is set a computer on. The computer induced and scanned them. Printed a list for me in the end.I held these books borrowed form library tightly and walked on my home way trippingly.

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-7-17 12:18:23编辑过]

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ccfeng 发表于 2006-7-17 19:58:57

Nice description of the library. This reflects the good reading ethos in China. This diary entry is really lively and well described. Keep up your good effort!

zoe 发表于 2006-7-18 11:20:21

That is very nice of you. ccfeng. you are a good example by writing in English for me. I will do my best. Thanks again!

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Rita娜 发表于 2006-7-18 11:43:01

<div class="quote">以下是引用zoe在2006-7-17 12:17:22的发言： 16th July Sunday                                Cool Today is Sunday, what is cool and suitable day after rained yesterday night. My classmate and me went to the library which standing in citizen center, Futain. It is a new building and had opening the day before yesterday. It cover is gray and has five floor. There are much various books in the library. I was so happy and excited, when I have turned over the books. I can’t help myself to want to borrow this book to read. Therefore I joined the line to make a borrower’s card own. There were so much people who were arranged four long teams there. An hour by, I came to the information desk. I handed in my information form and a piece of photo, and then handed over one hundred yuan as the deposit to them. This time I finally got my borrower’s card. Then I came to the shelf setting the English books and picked four books out, put those books and my borrower’s cared in a desk whose is set a computer on. The computer induced and scanned them. Printed a list for me in the end. I held these books borrowed form library tightly and walked on my home way trippingly. </div>Zoe, first thanks for your good piece of writing , it is really a good one though there are some mistakes , let me have a try to correct some mistakes as far as i can find,  Editted version : 16th July Sunday                                Cool Today is Sunday, which is a cool and suitable day after rain  last night. My classmate and I went to the library which stands in the  citizen center, Futain. It is a new building and it  opened business the day before yesterday. Its colour is gray and has five floors . There are various books in the library. I was so happy and excited, when I  turned over the books. I can’t help borrowing this book for reading . Therefore I joined in  the line to make a borrower’s card myself . There were so many people who were classfied into four long teams there. An hour by, I came to the information desk. I handed in my information form and a piece of photo, and then handed over one hundred yuan as the deposit to them. This time I finally got my borrower’s card. Then I came to the shelf and selected the English books and picked out four books , I  put those books and my borrower’s card in a desk  on which set a computer . The computer induced and scanned them then printed a list for me in the end. I held these books borrowed form library tightly and walked on my way home  trippingly.

zoe 发表于 2006-7-19 13:20:18

<div class="quote">以下是引用Rita娜在2006-7-18 11:43:01的发言: Zoe, first thanks for your good piece of writing , it is really a good one though there are some mistakes , let me have a try to correct some mistakes as far as i can find,  Editted version : 16th July Sunday                                Cool Today is Sunday, which is a cool and suitable day after rain  last night. My classmate and I went to the library which stands in the  citizen center, Futain. It is a new building and it  opened business the day before yesterday. Its colour is gray and has five floors . There are various books in the library. I was so happy and excited, when I  turned over the books. I can’t help borrowing this book for reading . Therefore I joined in  the line to make a borrower’s card myself . There were so many people who were classfied into four long teams there. An hour by, I came to the information desk. I handed in my information form and a piece of photo, and then handed over one hundred yuan as the deposit to them. This time I finally got my borrower’s card. Then I came to the shelf and selected the English books and picked out four books , I  put those books and my borrower’s card in a desk  on which set a computer . The computer induced and scanned them then printed a list for me in the end. I held these books borrowed form library tightly and walked on my way home  trippingly.   </div>Dear Rita, thanks very much! I have been waiting for you to correct my poor English.But I have some confusion: Fist, "what is a cool and suitalbe day before rain last night" is that right when i use that as 感叹句。second, "I was so happy and excited, when I had turned over the books" here use the 过去完成时，is it also suitable?  third, " I can't help myself to borrow this books to read" here "can't help myself " means 情不自尽。that is wrong?next, "There are many people who were classified four long teams" I use "the much people" want to express the people is so many without count in number. I admits I was wrong here. but the people was not be classified.   besides, "I came to the sheft seting the English book" I want to express that the library has various books, and the books are classified on different shetfs. I came to the Englsih books' sheft.

lease reply me once more and  thanks you again deeply!

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Rita娜 发表于 2006-7-19 16:36:32

But I have some confusion: First, "what is a cool and suitalbe day before rain last night" is that right when i use that as 感叹句。sorry to say that it is wrong, zoe! It should be "what a cool and suitable day (it was) after rain last night ",what do u think of it ??second, "I was so happy and excited, when I had turned over the books" here use the 过去完成时，is it also suitable? Zoe, i dont think it is suitable here, I think it should be the same tense as the sentence  third, " I can't help myself to borrow this books to read" here "can't help myself " means 情不自尽。that is wrong?Here u use the phrase" can't help  + doing", so i corrected the sentence like that, what is ur idea ?next, "There are many people who were classified four long teams" I use "the much people" want to express the people is so many without count in number. I admits I was wrong here. but the people was not be classified. Actually i see what you mean, but you should put " many "before people for "people" is a countable noun. besides, "I came to the sheft seting the English book" I want to express that the library has various books, and the books are classified on different shetfs. I came to the Englsih books' sheft.Firstly, here the word "sheft" should be"shelf", maybe you can express the sentence like this " i came to the shelf setting with English books",is that ok ?

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zoe 发表于 2006-7-20 15:27:54

rita, thanks for your help. I really learn more form you.

Rita娜 发表于 2006-7-22 11:22:59

You are welcome,  zoe,  we can learn from each other

christlulu 发表于 2006-8-20 18:26:40

i always miss the library in my school after graduation.there are all kinds of books there and i can borrow the books whenever i need.it is cool in summer and warm in winter,really a good place to read in .to the contrary, the library in guangzhou is totally different. we need to pay 50 yuan for the cards of every single room in the library and those cards expire after 3 months and we need to pay for them again.in order to cut cost, they seldom use air conditioners. so i wouldn't like to go to the library now.i often go to the book shops instead.

Rita娜 发表于 2006-8-21 10:35:36

Lulu, library is really a good place to read books and collect useful information,but I prefer to read in my dorm when I was in collage because I feel so sleepy in the library for its quietness,xixi

zoe 发表于 2006-8-22 18:09:13

Lulu, it is free in Shenzhen.At first, we need left a ￥100 deposit to get a card, The money will be returned.Then we can borrow books or reading in library. Books of your borrow's can keep about 20 days.But when you delay to return, you have to pay 0.3 yuan each day for over.

Rita娜 发表于 2006-8-25 12:45:58

When I was in colleage, i seldome went to the library to read books , but actually it is really useful to studay in the library, most of the college students went there for studying.But for me, I always went there to go on the internet, because there was a net bar in the library building, hoho~~~

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