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[讨论]有个4级作文题目

发布者: HappyLYnn | 发布时间: 2006-9-26 21:38| 查看数: 11030| 评论数: 8|

    有个奋战在4级战场上的朋友给的练习题。[em29]

     呵呵!大家看一下,在下面以 跟帖 的形式 把自己的答案贴上来吧!就当 练习 也好,跟战友们PK也好,总之是骡子是马都拿出来溜溜!

题目是:positive and negative aspect of home tutoring
            家教的积极与消极因素

   TIPS: 我的理解是 请家教的利弊 两个方面。

大家试试身手吧!

[em31][em46]

最新评论

HappyLYnn 发表于 2006-9-27 15:40:04
1?没人写啊 也许我自己应该先写一篇……
HappyLYnn 发表于 2006-9-27 17:19:33

我要写了哦 须知我可是个2年没见识过CET4、6的人哦 有不符合要求的欢迎各位多多指正哦!

POSITIVE AND NEGATIVE ASPECT OF HOME TUTORING

There are two opposite aspects of home tutoring.

First,let's talk about the positive aspect. Home tutoring can help students to make up what they can't master in the class.You know we sometimes can't learn the lesson heart and soul and may not get the knowledge. With the help of the tutors, we will not miss the key point.Besides, some weak students may be self-contemptuous, the  tutors will try to help them rebuild up their confidence.

Second,the disadvantage of home tutoring is also apparent.Some students may think that their parents will ask a tutor to teach them, and then they won't listen carefully in the class.

To sum up, whether we should engage a tutor depends on the children. Only if the child thinks he's lack of competence to learn well by hmself can we engage a tutor; otherwise we will destroy the confidence of the student and may cause their nonfeasance. 

HappyLYnn 发表于 2006-9-27 17:31:30

1~完咯 我那个朋友说我这个只能得40分……

满分100算的话

他说我的结构不正确——正确的应该是这样:

第一,要陈述现象

然后,要陈述观点

最后,要给出建议或意见

我对照了一下自己写的,的确一点都不符合——只能汗颜!

 

[em04]
liucongshan 发表于 2006-9-27 17:46:21

Positive and Negative Aspect of Home Tutoring

Nowdays,an increasing number of parents employ tutors for their children .Is it good , Is it bad ? Actually,there both pluses and minuses about it.

First,home tutoring can do some good to children.The tutor can teach child one-to-one and known the child clearly.They can catch up on the child's disadvantage.In addition ,the tutor and the child communicate with each other easily and freely.The child can ask anytime ,and the tutor will answer it immediately.

But ,home tutoring takes up the child's spare time ,and make little room for themselves .It will affect children's creative thoughts.So if you want to employ a tutor ,think twice ,please !

liucongshan 发表于 2006-9-27 17:48:33

嘎嘎,早说阿

看来我也得不到分了

liucongshan 发表于 2006-9-27 17:49:58

嘎嘎,你早说会啊,看来我这个也得不到分了!

HappyLYnn 发表于 2006-9-27 17:57:32

下面这篇是经过我朋友授权,发在这里,供各位观摩,呵呵!

nowdays,there are more and more stedents have home tutoring.it is eatimated 50% stu have home tutoring.
is it helpful to stu or not?
i think there are two sides of it which are postive and negative 
the one thing,why stu have home tutiring be on raised .
the main cause of it maybe the parent belivee that home tutoring can help the child acqure more knowledge .
but ,it takes the stu more leisure time which stu can do sports,play,and talk with others.
it is high time that something were done upon it
parents should balance the two sides of home tutoring and leisure time
parent should give child more options which are decided by themselves
if we had done it what the autour say in the passage
the measure will centainly boom the effects when the stu learn in growing

HappyLYnn 发表于 2006-9-27 18:00:26
5-7楼:你的很好啊!要现象有现象 要观点有观点的……
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