单词和句子是文章的基本要素，要写好一篇文章，首先要写好句子。我们可以把英语句子分成四个等级：

Level 1:short and broken

Level 2:short, correct and colorless简单的主谓宾结构eg: History is important.

Level 3:short, correct and colorful简单句式加上发光的词汇词组

eg: History is so important that it not only enables us to increase the understanding of some rules, but also enhances our ability to foresee the future.

Level 4:long, correct and colorful 主从复合句，倒装，强调句等的结合

eg: History plays a significant role in contemporary society, revealing some rules to us and enhancing our ability to foresee the future.

Of great importance is history which not only enables us to increase the understanding of some rules, but also enhances our ability to foresee the future.

从这里可以看出，从L1到L2，比较容易解决，就是在平时注意自己的语法错误，有一定语法基础的人通常犯的语法错误其实就是那么一两个，如主谓一致，时态语态等；从L2到L3，需要在大量阅读中发现好的词组，并且把自己平常用的词组和文章中的进行比较；从L3到L4，往往需要使句式多样化，因此需要不断地练习。

终极目标：Without history, human beings would be cornered on a desert island, with their origin diminishing in the remote past and their future losing itself in the wilderness.

练习方法：

L2到L3: 发现有用的词组：eg: a great deal of attention on

造句: Scientists focus a great deal of attention on outer space, which is fraught with natural resources.

L3到L4:

Eg:合并：1）因果关系-----状语从句，2）相同主语-----分词状语，3）相同名词-----定语从句

添加：1）名词+形容词/同位语/定语从句/分词，2）形容词-----倒装句/very的书面表达/介词+名次/so…that…,3)分词作状语

句式：1）倒装句，2）强调句，3）独立主格结构

现在大家学习新概念，都学会了许多漂亮的词组以及句式，但是很少有机会运用，写作文这个方法虽然很好，但是非常耗时，而且很难找到适合的话题，因此练习句子在一定程度上也能帮助大家巩固所学，学会运用。因此在这里我会每天贴一句英文，请大家用在新概念中所学到的来做翻译以及润色句子，甚至可以写成一段话，可以在我所写的英文句子的意思上增加内容，但是整段话的主体必须是原句所示的意思。跟贴有奖

Eg: History is important.



History is of importance.



History is so important that it not only enables us to increase the understanding of some rules, but also enhances our ability to foresee the future.



History plays a significant role in contemporary society, revealing some rules to us and enhancing our ability to foresee the future.



Of great importance is history which not only enables us to increase the understanding of some rules, but also enhances our ability to foresee the future.



Without history, human beings would be cornered on a desert island, with their origin diminishing in the remote past and their future losing itself in the wilderness.



第一篇：a lot of people want to make a lot of money.



[ 本帖最后由 christlulu 于 2006-12-13 23:21 编辑 ]

第一篇：a lot of people want to make a lot of money.



KEVIN:A lotof greedy peoplewant to make a lot of bloody money.

加上形容词，使得句子更生动，感情色彩更鲜明，GOOD!!

[ 本帖最后由 christlulu 于 2006-12-16 23:18 编辑 ]

A lotof greedy peoplewant to make a lot of bloody money.

[ 本帖最后由 kevin 于 2006-12-14 09:09 编辑 ]

A large number of people do their utmost to maximize their financial gain.

A lot of people regardless of greedy or not are urged yo make more and more money in our real life

弄的挺漂亮的,可是我不会

A great deal of pepole want to clean up a profit.

In order to provide a rich and colorful life to their family, a lot of people want to earn large amount of money ,gradually or overnight.

More and more people have the desire for money due to the increasingly development of material life.

[ 本帖最后由 dudu811900 于 2007-3-6 13:08 编辑 ]

A large number of people

There are always quite a few people who are so greedy that they would never miss even a tiny chance to earn as much as possible.

History is of importance.

A lot of people want to make a lot of money so as to have an enjoyful life.

A lot of greedy people want to make a lot of more money to satisfy their selfish

these sencerts are very difficulty,please give me a hand

up till now a large number of poor people really want to use lots of methods to make uncountable money in order to make their life happiness.

There are so many people who are eager to seeking for wealth .

跟帖就有奖的吗？

this story is of beauty

不会吧．．很难啊

这种方式不错啊,就是范文水平太高了,下面的就不会写了