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Dear Sir or Madam:
Your recruiting advertisement for ？？？positions on your website is of great interests to me. With a sound educational background demonstrated and a keen desire to be part of a professional company, I am submitting my resume and wish to apply for the positions referred above.
I am a graduate student from University of Science and Technology Beijing, and major in Automation. The main reason for my confidence in this position lies in both my extensive academic training in automation and my work experience in the relevant industry which has further polished my abilities. I took part in a project which is to analyze and improve the old automatic system of a blast furnace hot stove in XuanHua Iron&Steel Group Liability CO., Ltd, and programmed with BAILEY INFI90.
In addition to my academic excellence, my various aptitudes displayed in extra curriculum activities combined with fluent English ability as well as proficient computer skills prepare me a qualified candidate. For further information, please refer to my attached resume.
Thank you for your time and consideration and I anticipate the opportunity to meet with you to further discuss my qualification and your needs.
With enthusiastically personal regards,
Sincerely yours,
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语言是没有问题啦，我是大四的学生马上也找工作了。我觉得你还应该写的有条理点，简单点，一眼看上去就明了了。还有字弄大一点，我看着累的慌~
发一个网址给你自己看该怎么写英文简历，可能你看过了，不过希望对你有帮助。
另外祝你求职成功！
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