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再麻烦看下这2封邮件回复

发布者: 严淼 | 发布时间: 2009-6-18 21:58| 查看数: 1551| 评论数: 5|

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本帖最后由 严淼 于 2009-6-18 22:01 编辑

Writing e-mails1

To: Sue

From: Henry

Thank you for your e-mail reminding me about going to Helsinki tomorrow.

I spoke to him and we arranged a pricing strategies meeting on Monday morning. Can you let me know ifyou can come ?

Regards

yours faithfully

以下是我自己写的:(帮我看看句子对不对,如果你能帮我改正或加以补充,那就太感谢了。)

To: Henry

From: Sue

Sorry,I cant come.Because I have another a meeting about quality products. I wish you everything goes well

Regards

yours faithfully


Writing e-mails2

Tostevecooper@danos.com

From karenmitchell@danos.com

Hi Steve

John and I are going to have a meeting next Tuesday lunchtime. Are you able to come ?

Could you let me know ASAP.

Regards

yours faithfully

以下是我自己写的:(帮我看看句子对不对,如果你能帮我改正或加以补充,那就太感谢了。)

To karenmitchell@danos.com

From stevecooper@danos.com

Thank you for your e-mail reminding me about a meeting next Tuesday lunchtime. I must go. Plese call me on time.

Regards

yours faithfully

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To: Henry From: Sue Thanks for your arrangement. But sorry, I'm afraid i can't make time to do that. Because I have another meeting about quality products at the same time. I wish everything goes well. Regards yours faithfully

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Nicoffee 发表于 2009-6-18 21:58:02
To: Henry

From: Sue

Thanks for your arrangement. But sorry, I'm afraid i can't make time to do that. Because I have another meeting about quality products at the same time.

I wish everything goes well.

Regards

yours faithfully
tezukazyunko 发表于 2009-6-18 23:21:03
To: Henry

From: Sue

Sorry,I am afraid i can't .forI have anothermeeting about quality products. Wish you everything goes well

Regards

yours faithfully

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严淼 + 10 谢谢的改写,让我知道自己哪些地方需要注意 ...

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tezukazyunko 发表于 2009-6-18 23:23:28
Thank you for your e-mail reminding me about that/the meeting next Tuesday lunchtime. I'll certainly attend . Call me please.

Regards
Nicoffee 发表于 2009-6-19 08:13:20
To: karenmitchell@danos.com

From: stevecooper@danos.com

Thank you for your e-mail reminding me about the meeting next Tuesday lunch time. I'll certainly attend.

Call me when you set the time.

Regards

yours faithfully
严淼 发表于 2009-6-19 08:37:42
不好意思,我把两个问题放一起了,而系统只能选择一个最佳答案。

从你们改写的情况,我有些明白自己怕语法错误了,印象比较深。非常感谢tezukazyunko 和Nicoffee
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