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In recent years many Chinese people like to celebrate western festivals. Even some yongsters are paying （1①）as great attention to Christmas （1②）as our Spring Festival.（2①） In addition, other western festivals, like April Fool’s day and Valentine’s Day, are very popular among Chinese people.

（3）Many reasons contribute to this phenomenon. Among them, relaxing and comfortable atmosphere from western festivals plays a critical role.(2②) Moreover, more and more Chinese people begin to learn English,（4） which provides them with more chances（5） to be exposed to western culture and festivals. （2③）Besides, many businessmen desperately try to boost the atmosphere of foreign festivals to attract more customers.

（6）As far as I am concerned, our paying too much attention to western festibals will（7） bring some side effects. The popularity of western festivals（8） to some extent has influence our traditions. （2④）Therefore, I suggest that people should（9①） not（10） be immersed too much in the western festivals （9②）but ignore Chinese traditional festivals. 点评

（1） 意为“或...一样”，同级比较

（2） 衔接词语使文章条例清晰、意思连贯。

（3） 益处原因重用句式

（4） Which引导非限制性定于从句。

（5） 意为“暴露于”。

（6） 用于引出个人观点。

（7） 意为“带来负面影响”

（8） 意为“在某种程度上

（9） 意为“不是......而是.....”，连接并列结构。

（10） 意为“过分沉浸在...中”。