Write relocation company should Fenway choose? Write a report comparing the two companies and making your recommendation.Write 120-140 words.

首先我们要明白题目是什么意思？丰威公司应该选择哪家安迁公司？写一份报告，把两家安迁公司作一比较并提出建议。字数在120-140之间。

写作小窍门：

1。 商务报告要简洁明了，符合固定的格式规范。报告要有标题，每个部分还有简短的小标题，如事由、结论、建议等，令人一目了然。

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商务报告一般包含introduction事由，findings调查结果，conclusion结论及recommendations建议这几个部分。主要部分必备句型有：

introduction 事由部分必备句型

The aim/purpose of this report is to...本报告旨在......

The report set out to...本报告试图......

conclusion 结论部分必备句型

It was decided/agreed/felt that...决定、同意、认为......

No conclusions were reached regarding...关于......尚未得出结论。

recommendations 建议部分必备句型

We would recommend that...我们建议......

It is suggested that...建议......

下面是上期作业的范文：

Suggested answer134 words)

A comparison of ERS and Worldwide Relocation

Introduction

The aim of this report is to assess which of the two companies, ERS or Worldwide Relocation, would be the most suitable for the relocation of Fenway employees and their families from Seattle to Dublin.

Findings

Both ERS and Worldwide Relocation offer an accommodation and school search services.Both companies can organise visas and work permits.In addition to these basic services, ERS also offers removal and shipping assistance whereas Worldwide Relocation offers an integration programme and assistance with partner employment.The latter is a key requirement for Fenway.

Conclusion

It was concluded that both companies go some way to fulfilling Fenway's needs, but neither meets all its needs.

Recommendation

We would recommend that Worldwide Relocations be chosen to facilitate the relocation process as its services match Fenway's requirements more closely that ERS' do.