2014考研英语作文热门话题范文：放手去爱

　　From the picture above we can see that there arethree trees in the picture, and one of them isgrowing very strongly.(用一般现在时，且strongly运用不合适。可改为one of them grows very well) However,the other two trees (去掉)look like very small. If youtake a(去掉) careful notice, you’ll find that a tree hasbecome bend(bent) because of (去掉，因为后面是个句子)the big tree hostile his development. (the big treeholds back its growth)The drawer(drawer是抽屉的意思，painter) of the image aims at revealing acommon phenomenon in our country, children today are generally spoiled. There are twomajor reasons for the problem. On one hand, as the reform of population policy, mostfamilies are allowed(加to have)only one child who is usually regarded as the ‘apple’ ofparent’s(parents’) eye. Therefore, parents are always try (trying) their best to provide theirchild with everything they want. On the other hand, lacking the awareness of bearinghardships is also an important reason that can not be ignored.I think it is imperative that weshould take some effective measures. To begin with, our government can modify the policythat allows families to raise more than one students(child). In addition, the most (加effective或者important之类的形容词) measure of all is that we should cultivate the sense of dependent.Only in this way, can we meliorate the problem in the near future.

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　　参考分数：14分(满分20分)